Beautifully written. Write on and God Bless.

I like it. Shows your faith very well ^_^ It reminds me of a psalm. ^_^ Good job. The only thing I'd recommend is to end it like you began it, without the Jesus... ^_^ just to give it that symmetrical feel. Keep writing.

Write hard, write long, write until dawn~TLDG

That was just wonderful. Very powerful and simple at the same time.

It's really beautiful, Keep writing for him , God Bless xxoo

good work... just need to write more, to improve. God Bless...