wow, breathtaking. the whole randomness of it.

EB

I know this is some of your older work, but it has been on my favorites list from the moment I read it and have never taken the time to review. This is my favorite piece I have found on fp-the images, the flow, the mystery, everything you included in this piece really just fit together. Keep writing.

I love the feel to this as well! I love reading your works out loud! It does them justice.

beautifully abstract-and-not. "stupendous square spoils"-- nice alliteration.

I don't know if you've seen the movie, "Frida," the story about the Mexican painter (Frida Kahlo), poetess and Diego Rivera's wife. She was skewered in a car accident and that determined much of her life—if you can see, it will tell you how intensely this poem affects me. m

not bad at all.

the ending was wonderful and very well chosen if i may say so.

i'm sorry, but my brain's still spazzed out, kinda, so yeah. im leaving a bleah review. sorry.

i could've sworn i left a review for this...oh well, this is quite amazing. your wording is so...eloquent. beautiful poem, can't say any more then that.

~Sumi-chan; what you call love, i call pain.

your best; you do amaze me sometimes. -kismet.

woah. I love this. Awesome format, the whole thing is just great.

i adore the internal rhyme. i really like this.

very good take on a cliched subject. I love it when people reinvent things, and you certainly did that here.

i love the last line. and the title. and the whole poem. beautiful, really.

I like this. It's well written and interesting and everything. Reminds me of the blood brothers in a way. Great job and keep writing :D Also thanks for the reviews.