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| Elizabeth Bilberry 2005-07-30 ch 1,  | abusewow, breathtaking. the whole randomness of it. EB |
| The Postscript 2005-07-06 ch 1, | abuseI know this is some of your older work, but it has been on my favorites list from the moment I read it and have never taken the time to review. This is my favorite piece I have found on fp-the images, the flow, the mystery, everything you included in this piece really just fit together. Keep writing. |
| catseyeview 2005-03-30 ch 1, | abuseI love the feel to this as well! I love reading your works out loud! It does them justice. |
| linaeve 2005-03-25 ch 1, | abusebeautifully abstract-and-not. "stupendous square spoils"-- nice alliteration. |
| Manuel Fajar 2005-03-17 ch 1, | abuseI don't know if you've seen the movie, "Frida," the story about the Mexican painter (Frida Kahlo), poetess and Diego Rivera's wife. She was skewered in a car accident and that determined much of her life—if you can see, it will tell you how intensely this poem affects me. m |
| moonarised polane 2005-03-16 ch 1, | abusenot bad at all. the ending was wonderful and very well chosen if i may say so. i'm sorry, but my brain's still spazzed out, kinda, so yeah. im leaving a bleah review. sorry. |
| KonekOniko 2005-03-09 ch 1, | abusei could've sworn i left a review for this...oh well, this is quite amazing. your wording is so...eloquent. beautiful poem, can't say any more then that. ~Sumi-chan; what you call love, i call pain. |
| negligible fictional force 2005-03-08 ch 1, | abuseyour best; you do amaze me sometimes. -kismet. |
| myno 2005-03-07 ch 1, | abusewoah. I love this. Awesome format, the whole thing is just great. |
| stutter something profound 2005-03-07 ch 1, | abusei adore the internal rhyme. i really like this. |
| wordsworth in a garbage can 2005-03-07 ch 1, | abusevery good take on a cliched subject. I love it when people reinvent things, and you certainly did that here. |
| do not resuscitate 2005-03-06 ch 1, | abusei love the last line. and the title. and the whole poem. beautiful, really. |
| Made in U.S.A. 2005-03-06 ch 1, | abuseI like this. It's well written and interesting and everything. Reminds me of the blood brothers in a way. Great job and keep writing :D Also thanks for the reviews. |