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Reviews For: How the Leopards Got Their Spots

Hannah Rose Williams
2005-03-15
ch 1,
abuseI always felt I would make a good mango. But what if I don't want to make fun...?

Haha. A humorous intro. Well done. I can see that you enjoy writing. One quick edit: quiet, instead of quite.

Keep it up!
Shuyan
2005-03-10
ch 1,
abuseI must jolly ol' say that this is one of the most balliest (Best) stories ive ever gone and read. Great job me ol' chap and please continue to make a chapter two! If you have a chance can you check out my story Shade of darkness:The battle
Evil Zipper
2005-03-06
ch 1,
abuse“Well you know what I think?” Girgenti asked, menacingly.

“N-No”

“I don’t!"

that's great.

i like this story... the PETA people... hehe
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