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| Hannah Rose Williams 2005-03-15 ch 1, | abuseI always felt I would make a good mango. But what if I don't want to make fun...? Haha. A humorous intro. Well done. I can see that you enjoy writing. One quick edit: quiet, instead of quite. Keep it up! |
| Shuyan 2005-03-10 ch 1, | abuseI must jolly ol' say that this is one of the most balliest (Best) stories ive ever gone and read. Great job me ol' chap and please continue to make a chapter two! If you have a chance can you check out my story Shade of darkness:The battle |
| Evil Zipper 2005-03-06 ch 1, | abuse“Well you know what I think?” Girgenti asked, menacingly. “N-No” “I don’t!" that's great. i like this story... the PETA people... hehe |