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| outsidersgirl 2007-09-24 ch 1,  | abuseaq good one |
| Jaden Anderson 2005-04-04 ch 1, | abuseHahah that's an awesome story, I love it. The memories, the descriptions aha the Red Lace had even me turned on haha jk. But yea, it's kinda cool because Heather is my name haha... Anyways Good Job. Now just imagine what you could do if you chose to write full length stories. Once you get the patience for it tho haha since you said you didn't have that. Just so you know, I'm not going to be updating Carmella because I am going to finish it then try and get it published... But yea, great short story, it was sweet, not sappy at all. Just A short Love story. Great job, keep it up! Very talented... |
| BetterOffAsLovers 2005-03-08 ch 1, | abuseOh...This was so good! I loved it!! Most excellent. Keep up the good work, this rocked!! Please keep writing!! |
| aquagal 2005-03-06 ch 1, | abusereally good...one thing...at the end, it should be "You're beautiful" instead of "Your beautiful" and ditto for anywhere else you have that...i realy liked this! |
| blazing gem 2005-03-06 ch 1, | abuseWow! I really enjoyed reading Red Lace! It was so sweet and realistic! Great job on your story! |
| Kiley 2005-03-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseAw...sweet. This is awesome. |
| T. Finky 2005-03-06 ch 1, | abuseThat's cute! I love it, it kept me absorbed all the way through. |
| anonymous 2005-03-06 ch 1, anon. | abusethis is an amazing story...certainly the most well-written one ive read on this site. Are you planning on pursuing a career in writing? your talent definitely shouldnt go to waste. |
| Scarred Prisoner 2005-03-06 ch 1, | abuseNice job. This is a very well-written story and everything is described to an excellent standard... Well done. |