Hi, I just wanted to say that I'm a big fan of these short stories of yours - they're great! keep it up!

Hi--this was cool! It was a little weird, because one minute Brett was all joking around with Torrin, and then all of a sudden everything got serious, but it worked out in the end. It was a little mushy/cliche, but I liked it. I'll read the rest of the short stories later, but I'm kind of busy right now! Sorry it took me so long to return the favor of reviewing, I've been busy. Anyways, yeah, this story was cool, and I especially liked how you ended it.

Happy Writing!

~W.W.Krandomity

I love short stories!