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| Clap Clap Raise Your Hands 2005-05-16 ch 1,   | cool poem, i love the whole structure of this, nice use of rhyme too, short but says a lot, maybe you could use this as part of a whole poem / song? anyway, thanks for all the reviews, they're much appreciated, to answer you, a zebu is an asian ox :) hope to see more reviews from you soon, will come review your great poems again soon but i'll be quite busy for around 2 weeks, in the meantime, keep writing! x weasel within x |
| LovingTarquine 2005-03-06 ch 1, | Very nice flow of words. A little short but very profound. |
| and calliope said 2005-03-06 ch 1, | Short and true. I like it. |