FictionPress.com - let the words flow
| FictionPress.com - let the words flow |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| xo-lilacsxandxlolita-ox 2005-04-09 ch 1,   | Another beautiful poem, and the symbolism with hands is a wonderful concept to work upon. I liked the way that the reader gains a sense of hope while reading this way, and the imagery that you evoked through your writing is effectively displayed in tight formatting. Very nice. chibichocobo |
| UnknownLove 2005-04-05 ch 1, | cool you xanga so do me and my friend jackie check them out w.xanga.com/spankme_imgorgeous and if you need a new layout check out hers w.xanga.com/x_simplelayouts |
| Rosanna28 2005-03-17 ch 1, | This is so beautiful! Oh my gosh...I love the titel, it spoke to me right away and then the poem...it's just so awesomely written! ( Dunno if awesomely is a word but owell ^_^ ) Hey, I don't remember if I thanked you for reviewing my work a while ago?! So if I didn't, THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU so much! Much love, Rosanna. |
| t0mh4nk5 2005-03-12 ch 1, | GREAT poem. I love the idea of it and once again, the rhyming is great. You make it work well and it doesn't sound forced. keep writting and hopefully, I'll talk to you soon! We haven't talked in ages!-Sam |
| MaHaLLz 2005-03-10 ch 1, | that was so beautiful! |
| mizu no kokoro 2005-03-08 ch 1, | aw... one sweet peom to tell the message of you can make a difference~~ very nice~~ keep writing! |