Sad, sounds like you were going thru a lot of crap. I've had times like that, it's tiresome to cry so much. Nice job on the chorus. I'm sorry for your lost.

cool, i love the repeated verse, it really makes this song x weasel within x

That was such a strong, deep piece. I can really relate to it and the chorus really stood out to me. queenvixta

Love your song, it's grand and it probably even better to music. Do you write your own music too? Ranting, stopping myself before it goes on, lol. Keep up the good work. I usually don't review people who have so many more reviews than me, but this piece really touched me.

Dream Forever

That was good!

Wow I love this. SO beautiful. I would love to hear this played out. The emotions were just wow...wonderful. Great piece.

Very deep and tragic yet beautiful. Keep up the great work!

This is really powerful. I like how you don't make it completly clear who died- it adds to the air of mystery and saddness. Well done.

please R&R some of my work. I'll return the favor