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| firestar267 2008-10-02 ch 26,  | abusePerfect. I'm sorry I can't offer you a better review, but I have to go lol and to be honest, it was perfect. I had moments where I didn't like something about a character or when I wondered what the hell they were doing, or when I laughed and just overall, you did a really good job because it was so realistic. You got every character pinned. It's so hard to write so many differnet point of views, and to do it where they don't all sound the same is a great achievement :) I would love if you posted anything else! |
| Iizolda 2008-03-01 ch 26, | abuseMaybe thinking about a sequel? I would read it with pleasure:) |
| Kilian 2007-11-27 ch 26, | abuseCongratulation ! You finished you story ! Feel like a big acomplishment doesn't it? I was glad to read so thank you for it :D |
| merrymowmow 2007-10-27 ch 25, | abuseI was wondering when you're going to update? |
| Iizolda 2007-08-07 ch 25, | abuseWhy do we have to wait so long for a new chapter!? |
| Kilian 2007-07-25 ch 25, | abuseIt's been a long time since I read somehing where the declaration isn't followed by a kiss. It's a nice change :P Thank you for the fluffy chapter. |
| hpfreakout 2007-07-24 ch 25, | abuseAw, cute chapter. I love this story. More soon please. I can't believe it's almost over! :[ |
| ddz008 2007-07-24 ch 25, | abuseGreat chapter!! I was afraid that Ken would reject him, obviously in a kind manner but still it would be rejection. He has like him for so long? How sweet, I'm glad that now they'll have each other. Thanks for updating! :) |
| LakeAndFlames 2007-06-28 ch 24, | abuseMore Soon! |
| i-see-faeries 2007-06-03 ch 7, | abuseI love this already, even though I didn't finish it yet. ^^ It's just so amusing and real. Evan is so funny, and Cole is so cute. I love this. |
| Hanna 2007-06-02 ch 24, anon. | abuseWonderful story. I've been reading for quite a while. I noticed something that you wrote in your Chapter 23 that contradicts what you wrote in the previous. You wrote "I had abandoned the idea of getting to my car, and instead had all but run home." And then in the beginning of the next chapter, you had written "I can barely remember the drive to school...". I just thought you would like to know, as an author. Keep up the amazing work. I can't wait to read how it ends! -Hanna |
| rodeoclown 2007-05-13 ch 24, | abuseOh, you don't know how long I've been waiting for this moment! I didn't even think it was going to happen. Thank you, thank you, thank you. It was wonderful! |
| ddz008 2007-05-06 ch 24, | abuseGreat chapter! That was such a mean way to finish a chapter ¬¬ He finally knows that Evan loves him, it must be such a shock to him... I really don't know what's going to happen... Poor Evan... will Ken ever reciprocate his feelings? I'm glad that Aki helped them. Update soon, please! :) |
| Sundown 2007-05-05 ch 24, | abuseOH MY GOSH. Finally! I am so wrapped up in in the Ken and Evan segments of the story...this chapter, although short, was excellent...but you have me craving more! You're characters are so clear, and so definate. I still love this story as much as I always have...and the way its evolving is looking so promising I can hardly wait! |
| hpfreakout 2007-05-03 ch 24, | abuseOMG! Ken needs to run after him, like now. For someone who's so smart, he really needs to start moving. I totally love Evan though. He falls under the category of Favorite Fictionpress Character Ever. |