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| moonbeam elegance 2005-08-31 ch 1, | wowowowowow! i love how you keep repeating "a dull grey sky".amazing. |
| LancerDragoon 2005-08-06 ch 1, | Hey, it's been a while since you last wrote something (or a while since I last noticed that you wrote something). As with all your works, I love this. Even with the repitition (sp?), the poem flows freely, and because there IS repitition, it gave the poem some uniqueness. Ah, love this madly! |
| Glowing Aura 2005-04-10 ch 1, | Great writing! Wonderful job! |
| Mucada 2005-03-24 ch 1, | My cousin is such a talented person. :p But, this line doesn't sit right with me: Black birds flee in v-shaped flight It's not like there's anyway to change it, but...you know how we always have those one lines that we don't think are right. ;) Check out my ff.n account, because I uploaded that "dark years" story we were talking about. I have some fcking good ideas for it. Excitement. I'll call you tomorrow afternoon, after I get my working schedule. |