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Reviews For: A Dull Grey Sky

moonbeam elegance
2005-08-31
ch 1,
wowowowowow! i love how you keep repeating "a dull grey sky".amazing.
LancerDragoon
2005-08-06
ch 1,
Hey, it's been a while since you last wrote something (or a while since I last noticed that you wrote something). As with all your works, I love this. Even with the repitition (sp?), the poem flows freely, and because there IS repitition, it gave the poem some uniqueness. Ah, love this madly!
Glowing Aura
2005-04-10
ch 1,
Great writing! Wonderful job!
Mucada
2005-03-24
ch 1,
My cousin is such a talented person. :p

But, this line doesn't sit right with me:

Black birds flee in v-shaped flight

It's not like there's anyway to change it, but...you know how we always have those one lines that we don't think are right. ;)

Check out my ff.n account, because I uploaded that "dark years" story we were talking about. I have some fcking good ideas for it. Excitement.

I'll call you tomorrow afternoon, after I get my working schedule.
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