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Reviews For: What would you do? And other poems

Meh
2007-09-12
ch 10,
You wouldn't want to go through life with people thinking your someone your not, would you?
Meh
2007-09-12
ch 6,
Nothing lasts forever but influence is long lasting, great poem.
Meh
2007-09-12
ch 3,
Very nice poem, being removed is the only way to truly understand and observe people I've read. I agree to some extent.
Nina-chan
2007-04-04
ch 2,
I really like this one!
Unkle Sama
2005-10-26
ch 3,
Very meaningful, and something that many people, throughout the world, should look at and reflect on, as many of us could stand to live our lives, at least a little, like the "ghost".
Unkle Sama
2005-10-26
ch 1,
I get a very deep, penetrating "vibe" from the words of this poem. Almost as if...a sense of feeling that something was missed, or not understood. A feeling of wanting to be trusted and understood. I like the meaning and feeling that I picked up on when I read it.
kiyone
2005-03-11
ch 7,
What else can I say about this poem other than that I love it? This is yet another poem that makes me think...yes even I myself like to think something lasts forever..when in reality if you think about it...it really doesnt.Very good sune-chan, and I think I found one or two spelling errors in there though.. ^_^;
Kiyone\
2005-03-10
ch 6,
This is a wondeful collection of very good poems. I especially seem to like the last one, "Time". Each one of these poems have their own special message within their stanzas. Overall, Very good poems phwee! ~(^^)d
Thanos6
2005-03-07
ch 6,
Not a bad little collection, I liked "Ghost" the best. "Shadow" reminded me of Shakespeare's thing about "all the life's a stage." There's a few spelling problems, nothing major, and grammar looks well done.
SunsetFire
2005-03-07
ch 1,
Beautiful! *claps* simply beautiful!
Q-chan
2005-03-06
ch 1,
wow i really like that ^__^
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