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| Meh 2007-09-12 ch 10, | You wouldn't want to go through life with people thinking your someone your not, would you? |
| Meh 2007-09-12 ch 6, | Nothing lasts forever but influence is long lasting, great poem. |
| Meh 2007-09-12 ch 3, | Very nice poem, being removed is the only way to truly understand and observe people I've read. I agree to some extent. |
| Nina-chan 2007-04-04 ch 2, | I really like this one! |
| Unkle Sama 2005-10-26 ch 3, | Very meaningful, and something that many people, throughout the world, should look at and reflect on, as many of us could stand to live our lives, at least a little, like the "ghost". |
| Unkle Sama 2005-10-26 ch 1, | I get a very deep, penetrating "vibe" from the words of this poem. Almost as if...a sense of feeling that something was missed, or not understood. A feeling of wanting to be trusted and understood. I like the meaning and feeling that I picked up on when I read it. |
| kiyone 2005-03-11 ch 7, | What else can I say about this poem other than that I love it? This is yet another poem that makes me think...yes even I myself like to think something lasts forever..when in reality if you think about it...it really doesnt.Very good sune-chan, and I think I found one or two spelling errors in there though.. ^_^; |
| Kiyone\ 2005-03-10 ch 6, | This is a wondeful collection of very good poems. I especially seem to like the last one, "Time". Each one of these poems have their own special message within their stanzas. Overall, Very good poems phwee! ~(^^)d |
| Thanos6 2005-03-07 ch 6, | Not a bad little collection, I liked "Ghost" the best. "Shadow" reminded me of Shakespeare's thing about "all the life's a stage." There's a few spelling problems, nothing major, and grammar looks well done. |
| SunsetFire 2005-03-07 ch 1, | Beautiful! *claps* simply beautiful! |
| Q-chan 2005-03-06 ch 1, | wow i really like that ^__^ |