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| simpleplan13 2005-03-07 ch 1,   | i can relate... im in a smiliar situation right now.. I like this poem a lot except for one line..Do you not see how suicidal this makes me.. its to i dont know blantly there.. i think hinting at it might work better for this poem.. i fee like this person loves the other person too much to make them guilty and one spelling thing:playing simple rythems and melodys.. rythms |