I've always been a fan of your writing style. I love the symbolism and the exchange of words between the girl and the man, and how you didn't give them any other identity besides "the girl" and "the man". Short and sweet; a beautiful fairy tale.

Quite a pretty little fairly tale, indeed. :)

Great first chapter! I am really going to make sure I keep an eye out for it in the future!

By the way, can anyone please read a story I have on the site. It's called The Pocketwatch. Please read and review. Thank you very much!

Although the change of perspective at the end was awkuard, the descriptions were very beautiful. If you get a chance, please read my story Xalier.