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| substitute angel 2008-02-17 ch 1,   | I like this already and I think you've done a wonderful job of setting this story up. I like the fact that it's set in the '30s. You added a nice amount of description and used colorful words to bring your characters to life. Nice work. Cheers, Blue Calico |
| Lucy Grace 2007-12-23 ch 33, | Oh gosh this made me teary .. I'm (for lack of a less extreme word) in awe, your stories continue to impress me I love each one! It's now almost 2am and I've read three .. Tomorrow I'll have a mosey for some of the others. Go you! Yet another fave! |
| Experiment 156-SKYE 2007-04-08 ch 30, | You enjoy our torture dont you HOW DARE YOU |
| Experiment 156-SKYE 2007-04-08 ch 28, | I've said it before and I'll say it again I HATE YOU RIGHT NOW |
| Experiment 156-SKYE 2007-04-08 ch 24, | i'm looking forward to his reaction |
| Experiment 156-SKYE 2007-04-08 ch 20, | YES |
| Experiment 156-SKYE 2007-04-08 ch 17, | I HATE YOU SO MUCH RIGHT NOW! |
| Experiment 156-SKYE 2007-04-08 ch 16, | Why must you do this? WHY!?!? |
| Experiment 156-SKYE 2007-04-08 ch 13, | NO!!Good chap |
| Experiment 156-SKYE 2007-04-08 ch 7, | I'm so pathetic...I actually started to cry. I LOVE THIS!! (I usually dont like histories) |
| Iz 2007-03-31 ch 33, | wonderful story, I was wandering around the site looking for wartime stories when I found it. I read it all today, and rather enjoyed it! The way you ended it was sweet and wonderful and doesn't every girl wish she had a Jude? |
| ANGEL992210 2007-03-09 ch 33, | fantastic job. |
| xx.Shire.Lily.xx 2006-11-10 ch 33, | I LOVE THIS STORY, TOO! It's incredible! Though Josie is very Mary-Sue, I love her so much. She's the most awesome, perfect, wonderful, loveable Sue out there. And I love Jude, too! he's so perfect... and i think he's super-cute, too. And little Damien! ah! i LOVE HIM! Though this would have been a really touching story and all that if you killed Jude off, i'm personally really glad that you didn't. you already made me cry when you left him there on the battlefield... that must have been really tough for the readers that read this as you posted... not knowing what was going to happen! i was so grateful that i got to keep reading and i didn't have to wait! I think you should have a sequel for this story. it would be so cute - maybe just a few little snippets of what was happening in their lives or something. Or you could go wild and make a whole nother story, maybe this time with Damien as the main character or something. But one thing's for sure - i'm not ready to give up these characters yet!! I love how everyone's got their own personality and all that. YOUR STORY IS PERFECT! I love it! don't change it! and PLEASE keep wriring - you're one of the most talented authors i've ever read from. keep it up! |
| Wings As Eagles 2006-10-24 ch 33, | Wow...I cant remember if I read this chapter before, but this is such a PERFECTLY SWEET ending! GOOD JOB with this story!! I had SO much fun reading it! |
| castaways and cutouts 2006-08-18 ch 33, | I would have submitted reviews for every one of the thirty three chapters, but that would clog up your email inbox. Fantastic. Simply fantastic. Except for a few grammar/spelling mistakes, it was PERFECTAMUNDO! Anyway, I loved your characters a ridiculous amount. Especially Jude. Keep up the most splendiforous work! |