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Reviews For: Why the Willow Weeps

stargazer
2007-01-13
ch 1,
Once again, as I said on the bus, I absolutely loved it. I always loved Willows, and I now have one more reason. It's truly a blessing to know that He has a reason for all his creation. And it's for us. Wonderfully done.
e a t i n g . f l o w e r s
2006-03-08
ch 1,
This is very nice. It's sad, and sentimental. I do like the first paragraph the most. It is very pretty and symbolic. Keep it up!
rrmehta364
2005-10-05
ch 1,
wow, your a really good poet. i like the metaphor a lot, maybe make me think the next time i see a willow weep.
Ballerina with a Gun
2005-09-25
ch 1,
That is so pretty. I'm not very religious (at all), but I stumbled upon this and I found the enigma surrounded this incredible. Beautiful job.
Loriency
2005-08-19
ch 1,
*smile* I like that very much. I've actually wondered how God got the idea of a lot of thigns, and the willow tree was one of them. It's very cool, and I like the jumbled way of writing that you did, not quite completing a phrase in each line, it leaves the poem with a rocky flow, and really makes it very cool. Cya
Pheobe Meryll
2005-08-18
ch 1,
Absolutely beautiful. I love your sensitive descriptions. The first two verses were just gorgeous. Keep writing.
Barbados
2005-08-16
ch 1,
Everything good (as defined by me, anyway) poetry should be. Beautifully flowing, full of great imagery, and thought provoking. Masterful.
Bleeding-Gemstone
2005-08-14
ch 1,
I really like this. Keep writing.
arwen-evenstar89
2005-03-24
ch 1,
wOw! i haven't read any of your writing for a while... i forgot how good it is!! this whole poem is awesomely descriptive, and the last two verses are really, really cool. i love it!

~Lauren~
Broken Petals
2005-03-08
ch 1,
This was so. . . beautiful. And deep. And other positive adjectives for poetry. Really, it was a gorgeous poem.
Caduceus-Vulcan
2005-03-07
ch 1,
'Fingerlike to brush

The azure heavens'I thought that was so cool.

' A mysterious

Beauty that can give

A tremulous hope

To a saddened soul'Even cooler, I'm definitly putting this in my fav's, nice work.

*Underhill.
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