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| stargazer 2007-01-13 ch 1, | Once again, as I said on the bus, I absolutely loved it. I always loved Willows, and I now have one more reason. It's truly a blessing to know that He has a reason for all his creation. And it's for us. Wonderfully done. |
| e a t i n g . f l o w e r s 2006-03-08 ch 1, | This is very nice. It's sad, and sentimental. I do like the first paragraph the most. It is very pretty and symbolic. Keep it up! |
| rrmehta364 2005-10-05 ch 1, | wow, your a really good poet. i like the metaphor a lot, maybe make me think the next time i see a willow weep. |
| Ballerina with a Gun 2005-09-25 ch 1, | That is so pretty. I'm not very religious (at all), but I stumbled upon this and I found the enigma surrounded this incredible. Beautiful job. |
| Loriency 2005-08-19 ch 1, | *smile* I like that very much. I've actually wondered how God got the idea of a lot of thigns, and the willow tree was one of them. It's very cool, and I like the jumbled way of writing that you did, not quite completing a phrase in each line, it leaves the poem with a rocky flow, and really makes it very cool. Cya |
| Pheobe Meryll 2005-08-18 ch 1, | Absolutely beautiful. I love your sensitive descriptions. The first two verses were just gorgeous. Keep writing. |
| Barbados 2005-08-16 ch 1, | Everything good (as defined by me, anyway) poetry should be. Beautifully flowing, full of great imagery, and thought provoking. Masterful. |
| Bleeding-Gemstone 2005-08-14 ch 1, | I really like this. Keep writing. |
| arwen-evenstar89 2005-03-24 ch 1, | wOw! i haven't read any of your writing for a while... i forgot how good it is!! this whole poem is awesomely descriptive, and the last two verses are really, really cool. i love it! ~Lauren~ |
| Broken Petals 2005-03-08 ch 1, | This was so. . . beautiful. And deep. And other positive adjectives for poetry. Really, it was a gorgeous poem. |
| Caduceus-Vulcan 2005-03-07 ch 1, | 'Fingerlike to brush The azure heavens'I thought that was so cool. ' A mysterious Beauty that can give A tremulous hope To a saddened soul'Even cooler, I'm definitly putting this in my fav's, nice work. *Underhill. |