Wonderfully vivid descriptions here. Just beautiful. Brava!

That was AWESOME! I love how you didn't stay within the traditional boundaries of poetry. AND THERE WERE ALICE REFERENCES! *note: Amber's favorite book*I haven't commented on your work in a long time. So sorry for the delay darling! Here I am! Returned I have! And I love this piece! I adore it! Favorites list!-Amber

I really loved the style! Very interesting and choppy. Absolutely loved it.