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| Feel The Waltz 2008-07-08 ch 1,  | abuseThere's very little to say about this, as i can't find the words to descibe it. I've got goosebumps... |
| unlikely.story 2008-06-17 ch 1, | abuseWow. That was really poignant. Thank you for that. |
| MelodicHarmony 2008-06-13 ch 1, | abuseThis... is awesome. I absolutely love it. It's so sad, and yet so well written... Kudos. |
| S. Elizabeth Arouet 2008-06-07 ch 1, | abuseThis is beautiful. I love the style. You can really hear the character's voice. I feel like I almost know her. Great job. |
| Maxegirl1313 2008-05-28 ch 1, | abuseOh, wow! I wish i know what 'suicide note 2'said. I was almost in tears. Which is saying something because i NEVER cry about things... last time i cried for a story... i was 8 years old... Any-who, that was very well written! |
| klleongmsia 2008-05-27 ch 1, | abuseAm i allowed to cry? Oh god! That was so great! Pity I'm in the University library, if not I'll am going to start crying any moment. |
| naadz 2008-04-24 ch 1, | abusethis was an amazing piece of writing...i feel like i know what shes feeling..wow |
| Nic 2008-03-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseOne of the most beautifully written, satisfying and unsatisfying stories I've read in a really long time. |
| Insomiak 2008-02-27 ch 1, | abuseLast line was killer. (heart). |
| M. Massacre 2008-02-26 ch 1, | abuseOh, wow... You know, I made it through the whole damn thing without even batting an eyelash, without one out-of-place breath, and then that very last line, and now I'm CRYING. Gosh, thanks. But still, wow. |
| Arunesce 2008-02-01 ch 1, | abusewow. this piece is quirky and simple, but very moving. is it autobiographical? |
| bewildered 2008-01-04 ch 1, | abuseThis is fabulous. That's all. |
| Silver Eyed 2007-12-14 ch 1, | abuseWow, this story is filled with emotion. So much emotion that made me come to tears. Suicide is a difficult thing to talk, think, read or write about, but yet you managed to do it with such eloquence. I applaud you for this piece of work. I love the little number sequences (from 9 all the way to 1). I think that is extremely creative. Good job! I kind of wish the narrator had read the letter, however I feel it ended where it should. I know that is completely contridicting myself but it's true. I wish I had known what the suicide letter said yet AT THE SAME TIME, I felt the ending was appropriate. I love this, and thus I am adding it to my favorite stories list. |
| hopelessromanticfool 2007-11-20 ch 1, anon. | abusethis one's good...if only you'd finish it... :) |
| A Perfect Sonnet 2007-10-21 ch 1, | abuseThat was wonderfully written. There were some really interesting perspectives on suicide in this piece that made it really original. Incredibly well done. |