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| Prince Tin Lizzy 2005-06-13 ch 6, | Well, um, Laiger is a little...girly. The only thing i can say is that it would help if you put some kind of break in this so that the reader doesn't get confused when the points of view change. You know, likr a little dashy line or something. fav. quote: “But I do have a large collection of stuffed bunnies, which may come to life at any time.” |
| Prince Tin Lizzy 2005-05-02 ch 5, | Woo, search party with sexy Dakarra! (I love Dakarra, by the way). I want to know more about Dreyven and his asexual self, because I would totally laugh if he and Raaline like, fell in love or somthing (no kids for them). fav. quote: "Honestly, if I don’t return with the brat, the queen will eat my intestines for dessert!" |
| Tin Lizzy 2005-03-25 ch 4, | ha ha - Dakarra's plagued by Darkness...DARKNESS!fav.quote: "She was only half-elf, her father had been human, though many townspeople joked that she was half-orc." |
| Prince Tin Lizzy 2005-03-22 ch 3, | Arrghh, make your chapters longer! I need to know if he steals the freakin orbs or not! Gil-Akhel! |
| Evil Leprechaun 2005-03-20 ch 3, | good start! update soon please Laters! |
| GotinksX 2005-03-20 ch 3, | Nice story great length. Check out soe of my works. your a nice writer. Don't let no one tell you wrong. |
| Lizzy 2005-03-10 ch 2, | This is cool. I really liked your description of the king (he reminded me of my dad). As usual, I have only one complaint - stop writing so many stories! Lol, don't take that the wrong way, I love 'em all! Shirtless men! *ts* *steam steam* Too hot - get some ice! "Are you calling me a bean?!" |
| Prince Tin Lizzy 2005-03-07 ch 1, | Howcome all elfy sorcerers have to be butts? geez. As you can tell, my review engine is working again and my computer has been freed from the prison of About Blank. btw: WOULD YA SLOW IT DOWN WITH THE STORIES ALREADY! US FLOOFY DOOFS NEED TIME TO PROCESS THINGS, REMEMBER! |