Reviews for Kyp's Anthology of Love

ApathiaRenaissance 2005-04-08 ch 1,	fairly rudimentary. cliche at best. i suppose all love is, but there's nothing to hold real interest. rhyming doesn't make poetry, an original voice does. try to find your unique perspective, and to play with verbs a little more. the sentiment is good, now all you need is to add the you. language is the essence of all writing and the tool to expression.
wordsworth in a garbage can 2005-03-06 ch 1,	hey, it wasn't too bad. It grew on me. really liked/could relate to the feeling useless quality of it. I think we've all felt that at some point, and you paint a subtly raging picture. I liked it.