Purely amazing and thats not even half of it. I honestly can't think of any words that would describe how much I loved this story, But then again, I'm like that with all of your stories. They're so intense to me. Very good

~Baal

that was...very...weird..~_~ but yeah...intense...just like Narcissa, just like nothing i've ever read before. and i doubt i'll ever read anything alike again. Lol. =) well, i like it. kinda. i can't pinpoint how i feel about it...~_~

deep, very deep and soulful. excellenté :D
awesome
sensational
beautiful

REading this is soo much better than being forced to do math homework. I loved it!

Haha, Narcissa. I loved how she had an obsession with drowning, really tied with her name and all. Just like in Narcissus's tale, where he had a fixation with his reflection and fell in the river, right? I loved how you used that myth and worked so well with your story.

Though she didnt seem much like the kind of conceited type, everything fit. Though it would have been a lot more impactful if the clothes she wore weren't already a huge trend already. All the way through the story i kept thinking "lulz emoemoemoemo 8D", though it's deeper than that.

The suicide part was great, though. And the way you showed Narcissa's aggressive, manipulative personality was awesome.

I really do love your style of writing. Though i find it strange with absolutely no dialogue, the first-person view makes it easy to relate to. Your descriptive style really brings out the passion in the stories. :D Wo yay good story.

wow... i didnt completely understand it, but it was very appealing. i suppose not understanding it was actually most of the appeal, because it induced emotion, but not in a coherent way...
yeah. :D

I liked this a lot actually. Really good. A little confusing though. I think that though the unknown speaker is probably intentional, you should paint a better picture of who the other person is.

It was dark, I read the other one too. There different but I think I like this one more. Good job.

wow. very original, and i like how it's sort of first person and sort of second person.

...Woah. I thought it'd be cliched from the beginning, but it's not. Is there any way to describe the swirl of bouncing ideas and images? So very vivid. So very intriguing. Fascinating. Very well written...

Reading this at half past one in the wee hours of the morningnight and it's so depressive and silent, and I sometimes want to know if Narcissa's real or just your muse, but that's prying too much, isn't it? Well, good night. I think this is the last story I'll read tonight.

"She loved you. She just loved drowning more."

M. I like that quote. The flow of this piece fit wonderfully. Nicely done, methinks. :)

Good thing these reviews are typed, because I haven't picked my jaw up off the floor yet. This is an incredibly good story. Weird, I'll admit, but insanely good.

I liked that. it was cool. I just wish Narcissa didn't have to die. especially by drowning. I almost drowned once, not fun.

Awesome story. Liked the way you wrote it and how it all flowed...^^ hope you have more stories on the way...