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Alex-Blake 2005-03-17 ch 1,	Some lines stood out But this needs a serious edit as some lines are cliche and seem just to be fillers and unnessarcery to the sucess of this prom. Rewrite it again
Victim of the Wraith 2005-03-09 ch 1,	I like it. It is very deep and passionate. You have such a vibe to your writing. I'm not sure but I think this is a love poem between two people who say they like one another but will not admit it. That they know each other very well and yet feel like they're being pushed of a plateu into another unknown region. Just a thought. May not be right.
Eirien 2005-03-09 ch 1,	Powerful, again your imagery is very unusual and interesting. It is intriguing how the reader does not really get to know what the poem's message is until the end. And I really like that message, becuase I csn relate in a way, and in another way it simply touches me, and I recognize it as true. How we hunger for some recognition of ourselves, our pain, for some little sign of love. "You held the knife of salvation but insisted on curing yourself" - that's a haunting line, and great image.
Locomotive Breath 2005-03-06 ch 1,	that was really well written. i love how you stressed certain phrases, and really adressed the reader. the last line was really powerful and was a really great ending. i thought it was really sad and really powerful.