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| Merciful Evans 2005-08-24 ch 1,   | I really go for the casual, comfortable feel in your poetry. It's great how you can manage sarcasm without being scathing and maintain that mellow irony. |
| Devika-Fay 2005-04-03 ch 1, | thats hilarious!kinda lighthearted, and entertaining in a rambling, babbling sort of way. |
| Cyclonica 2005-03-06 ch 1, | I've always thought myself that caffeine was overrated... good descriptions. Really puts you in a mood. Sleepylike. |
| eatfoodyum 2005-03-06 ch 1, | oh it's lovely. I really like the way you use language...randomly yet it all makes sense. |
| wordsworth in a garbage can 2005-03-06 ch 1, | beautiful- the sometimes frantic air of it was excellent. spendid poem. |
| alf4office 2005-03-06 ch 1, | Wow, great poem! There's a ton of content in it. I like the last stanza the best. I wonder why they woke to see they sunrise if they didn't think the day was worth staying awake? Couldn't they see the beauty in nature, or were they really that pragmatic? |