I really go for the casual, comfortable feel in your poetry. It's great how you can manage sarcasm without being scathing and maintain that mellow irony.

thats hilarious!kinda lighthearted, and entertaining in a rambling, babbling sort of way.

I've always thought myself that caffeine was overrated... good descriptions. Really puts you in a mood. Sleepylike.

oh it's lovely. I really like the way you use language...randomly yet it all makes sense.

beautiful- the sometimes frantic air of it was excellent. spendid poem.

Wow, great poem! There's a ton of content in it. I like the last stanza the best. I wonder why they woke to see they sunrise if they didn't think the day was worth staying awake? Couldn't they see the beauty in nature, or were they really that pragmatic?