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| Sorcery With Words 2006-08-23 ch 3,   | Ooh ! This is a very, very nice story. Can't wait for the next chapter ! |
| Magdalen13 2005-04-03 ch 3, | Oh what a place to leave it! You'd better update, hadn't you? :-)No, really it is pretty good so far. I like your writing. There are a few typos, but not so that it's really noticeable. i don't have much else to say right now but I'm sure i will think of something. Thanks! |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-03-28 ch 1, | This is very nice. |
| The Lonely Vampire 2005-03-23 ch 2, | Yeah. I see, judging from most of the reviews, that Drysi is liked a little more. I made it on purpose so that niether of them was actually right, so that you weren't stuck with one character as the undisputed hero.There are a few more characters to come, too... |
| Sekhmet Johnson 2005-03-14 ch 2, | I like drysi the best, sunnee decides.When her mouth is closed, that is. -grin- Nah. Her internal monologues are very enjoyable, as is her character. she reminds me of my sister. |
| PadmaeGirl 2005-03-09 ch 2, | Very good! Keep up the good work.` |
| PadmaeGirl 2005-03-09 ch 1, | I like it! It makes me think about how I treat others, and also, It makes me feel sorry for Drysi. How dare that ungrateful little boy leave on her like that! |
| Raving Blackbird 2005-03-07 ch 1, | YAY! Love! 'Tis so WAFF! (Warm and fuzzy feeling) WRITE MORE. NOW! |
| Sekhmet Johnson 2005-03-06 ch 1, | I loved the last bit the best. 'Drysi yawned again, and watched, bored, as he spun around on his heel and ran away. She could see right through him…And now the cave was empty. Drysi rocked back and forth in her throne, her hands wrapped around her knees. Bitter tears streamed down her face. She didn’t want to be alone. This was unfair.'-grin- poor ole drysi. Anyway, this is AWESOME. Lengthen it! Expand! Continue.. |
| The Lonely Vampire 2005-03-06 ch 1, | Aww, thanks. XD Sure, I'll try to continue it. Thanks for the idea! |
| scarlet-pictures 2005-03-06 ch 1, | I love the names, very unique. Short story?? You mean there won't be anymore? *sniff* Noo... You should continue this, it has the makings of a great story. Well... I mean it IS a great story... but I would love for you to continue it. |