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| Sorrowful Dreams 2005-07-22 ch 3,   | so true...this little story is really good. nice ending. you're right, no one should give up because there's always something out there. ~Sorrow~ |
| D. H. Laydee 2005-06-30 ch 2, | Or should I say...you got together? |
| D. H. Laydee 2005-06-30 ch 3, | Hmm. That's one interesting story. I mean good interesting, not bad interesting. I'm glad they finally got together... |
| kody 2005-06-30 ch 3, | Aw based on a true story! I loved it! It was so sweet and I wish you the best of luck for you and Mark! : ) Take Care! -Kody |
| kody 2005-06-30 ch 2, | Hehe. Girl talk. I assume it'd get annoying when you're happily day dreaming about you and your guy with your friends all around you wondering what had happened. lol. Great chapter. (And thank god I'm late at reading this story and you added the next chapter so I wouldn't have to be left at a cliffhanger! lol) Good job! : ) -Kody |
| kody 2005-06-30 ch 1, | Aw..That last line that Mark said, I can relate so much that you could've made me tear up! Damn you! lol. Only Kidding. Great First Chapter! : ) Kody |
| Naoko Tasaki 2005-05-06 ch 2, | Again, very nice! Your officially going to be one of my most favorite authors here! Keep going! |
| SecretAznJen 2005-04-10 ch 2, | Oh wow. You must write more! I love it. Love it, love it, love it. |
| Perilous Escapist 2005-04-01 ch 2, | Ahh this is mean, I hate cliffhangers.:( Well, actually I love them because it keeps me interested, but I wish you had another chapter up. Oh well...this is really good so far, update soon. |
| Perilous Escapist 2005-04-01 ch 1, | Aw...this was sweet...yes, do continue it! I like how it's not so romantic you roll your eyes, but it's subtly romantic and it makes you smile. Very nice, keep writing! |
| Lady Hoshi 2005-03-14 ch 2, | I'm not really into very lovey dovey, but it was cute, and if i say that then it must be pretty good lol. The chaps could be a bit longer and more detail, but whom I to say? I suck at stories. Anyway, keep up the good work and thanks for all the nice reviews. :) |
| mizu no kokoro 2005-03-12 ch 2, | yay~ an update~~ sweet as before, but i hate Lilly, i hate the name, the person~ but not the person you created, at least not yet O_o Good job~~ keep writing! |
| mizu no kokoro 2005-03-12 ch 1, | thats so CUTE!^^ more chapters, definitely more chapters~ can't wait!!^^ kawaiiness~~ keep writing! |
| thedarkthatiwas 2005-03-11 ch 1, | Oh neat! Write more, more chappies, I just LURVE stories with chappies aded every week or so, to keep up with... Write more! |
| SecretAznJen 2005-03-07 ch 1, | Aww. It's so cute! You should definitely write more! |