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| angelicdust 2007-06-25 ch 26,   | this chapter has to be the best one out of all the others in this story..it was really good. and what sadie did was what any other (sensible)girl would do. i loved this chapter... everyhting just clicked. sadie's getting to terms with life and that's great to see..and inspiring too. and now i'll say..UPDATE soon! for review number 192? plz? |
| angelicdust 2007-06-24 ch 25, | why is jordan being the jerk now? he was supposed to the adorable one! sigh.. |
| angelicdust 2007-06-24 ch 24, | me don't like cliffhangers! atleast i don't have to wait for an update! and learning japanese i think.. |
| angelicdust 2007-06-24 ch 23, | well..atleast now art knows how sadie feels. and it's sad you're going to end this..seriously. |
| angelicdust 2007-06-24 ch 22, | hmm..that was rather short. is there going to be a new character? and nikki seems as if she desperately wants to get to sadie's good side. |
| angelicdust 2007-06-24 ch 21, | i don't know what to say...i don't. so i'll go on to the next chapter. |
| angelicdust 2007-06-24 ch 20, | things not looking good..nikki? bad idea. i think you're a little confused about 'your' and 'you're' coz they're used in the wrong places sometimes. and also member's only should read members only and dad want's us to.. should read 'wants'. i completely agree with lexi about that song!hehe. |
| angelicdust 2007-06-24 ch 19, | god..that was horrible! the woman, i mean...not the chapter! i can't believe she said 'mistake' and 'putrid'. yeah..the transition of mood did seem sudden. |
| angelicdust 2007-06-24 ch 18, | ok, art doesn't sound the jerk i thought him to be at the beginning.. the dialogues while they were running made me laugh! i think sadie's still confused about art/jordan... |
| angelicdust 2007-06-24 ch 17, | oh,,it was clark! hmm...i was never good at predicting plots anyway. i get it only when it's thrown straight at my face. hehe. and the dad's way too cool! |
| angelicdust 2007-06-24 ch 16, | what is happening around here? okay, considering i've always liked jordan and never really hated lexi...maybe they COULD be great together...if jordan IS the superman, that is. and art and sadie could be great too, now that those lyrics confirmed his feelings for her. but with nikki around..not easy. |
| angelicdust 2007-06-24 ch 15, | hey..i was right! the lyrics are awesome..the way they convey the feelings..there's not much of dialogue in the story but the lyrics fill the void and they're just great. okay, i've got to read on to find out who lexi's mr.perfect is... |
| angelicdust 2007-06-24 ch 14, | things are happening, people! as you can see, i'm all excited! see..everything's ending with an exclamation! yeah, that's enough. but rock on! |
| angelicdust 2007-06-24 ch 13, | no, no, no! why is this happenning? okay, enough drama. i really feel for sadie. poor girl. great lyrics, i must say! |
| angelicdust 2007-06-24 ch 12, | yay! sadie's giving jordan a chance! umm.. did i ever subtly suggest i like jordan better than art? hehe. i liked this chapter! good going! |