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Reviews For: Field Beginings

Elle Blaisure
2006-08-16
ch 1,
A very interesting and thought provoking story. I really was able to get inside the mind of the narrator and in some strange way understand her. You're a wonderful writer, and I really do look forward to more!

Laurel B.
Tiny
2005-04-23
ch 1,
There will be more chaptures wont there? Though one review hardly makes a difference in the end. I would like to see where this character goes, does she later pull herself together for some reason of another, or continue to live a hollow life, and just get better at it. Dark and very capturing.
_jem_
2005-04-13
ch 1,
wow! :) is this a one-shot? i wish it wasn't...i want more! hehe...
twistedFAerieTALes
2005-03-22
ch 1,
woah. really deep...and twisted-i like! it stands well alone, but if u plan on making it into a story, update soon! btw, u should update phoenix arrow too! :) ~Sage
izzy-bh
2005-03-14
ch 1,
I've never read anything quite like this. It's so different from all those conventional ones I've read on FicPress. Congrats! I think you did a perfect job in creating a point of view from a woman whose experience are probably almost unimaginable - i would find it impossible to write a first person account of all those events. You're so good at it!izzy
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