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| Elle Blaisure 2006-08-16 ch 1, | A very interesting and thought provoking story. I really was able to get inside the mind of the narrator and in some strange way understand her. You're a wonderful writer, and I really do look forward to more! Laurel B. |
| Tiny 2005-04-23 ch 1, | There will be more chaptures wont there? Though one review hardly makes a difference in the end. I would like to see where this character goes, does she later pull herself together for some reason of another, or continue to live a hollow life, and just get better at it. Dark and very capturing. |
| _jem_ 2005-04-13 ch 1, | wow! :) is this a one-shot? i wish it wasn't...i want more! hehe... |
| twistedFAerieTALes 2005-03-22 ch 1, | woah. really deep...and twisted-i like! it stands well alone, but if u plan on making it into a story, update soon! btw, u should update phoenix arrow too! :) ~Sage |
| izzy-bh 2005-03-14 ch 1, | I've never read anything quite like this. It's so different from all those conventional ones I've read on FicPress. Congrats! I think you did a perfect job in creating a point of view from a woman whose experience are probably almost unimaginable - i would find it impossible to write a first person account of all those events. You're so good at it!izzy |