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| thestonedfox 2005-06-23 ch 1, | i know this poem's kind of old already but i found it in someone's fave list. Wow. dude, this is really good. you picked the right words, rhymed it perfectly without trying hard and got your message across. it's a different poem and i haven't een one like this in a while. in fact, i haven't seen anyone pull it off as good as you. ~champagnewishes |
| do not resuscitate 2005-04-06 ch 1, | amazing descriptions. i love the rhyming and the word choice. god, this is just perfect. |
| silverdream139 2005-03-07 ch 1, | why is that so beautiful. **, I love it. +fave |
| vicious like the blue sky 2005-03-07 ch 1, | this is just awesome. i love the metaphors. i love the internal ryhme of favors/elevators. |
| wordsworth in a garbage can 2005-03-07 ch 1, | oh man. I think I love it. like the metaphor, the characters- and the title. as soon as I was at the Just In page and saw you, I had to check it out. it's awesome. |