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Reviews For: Do You Favors Like Elevators

thestonedfox
2005-06-23
ch 1,
i know this poem's kind of old already but i found it in someone's fave list.

Wow. dude, this is really good. you picked the right words, rhymed it perfectly without trying hard and got your message across.

it's a different poem and i haven't een one like this in a while. in fact, i haven't seen anyone pull it off as good as you.

~champagnewishes
do not resuscitate
2005-04-06
ch 1,
amazing descriptions. i love the rhyming and the word choice. god, this is just perfect.
silverdream139
2005-03-07
ch 1,
why is that so beautiful. **, I love it. +fave
vicious like the blue sky
2005-03-07
ch 1,
this is just awesome. i love the metaphors. i love the internal ryhme of favors/elevators.
wordsworth in a garbage can
2005-03-07
ch 1,
oh man. I think I love it. like the metaphor, the characters- and the title. as soon as I was at the Just In page and saw you, I had to check it out. it's awesome.
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