Absolutely beautiful! The ending is quite encouraging and deffinately a surprise! The title of this poem and the first few parts make it seem like it will be completely dark but the ending brings in a spark of hope. Good job and keep it up!

Well done! Very evocative, I could relate to it... The emotions come through very clearly, the progression from despair to an incredulous hope... Very nice. It flowed very nicely, too, very smoothly, with a very natural rhythm. All around great! Keep writing, and thanks for the reviews, you made my day! :o)

I really like this one. Definatly one of my favourite poems. At first it seems so angsty and depressive (which isn't neccesarily a bad thing). But then, halfway through it turns, and it seems like there's a flicker of hope among the darkness. Really nice poem.