Reviews for Rich and poor - FictionPress.com

fairEtales 2006-03-27 ch 1,	I completely agree. I feel the same way. It just ** you off, you know? However, I think that you should try not rhyming. A lot of it seems really forced and I think that you could do a lot better and it will help get your point across without set on a rhyme scheme. It's a really good message though!
YueDreamer 2005-03-17 ch 1,	true true true true! I totally agree with you. Even though I am one of these observers. I am ashamed of myself. But you know... and then, I never said I was perfect or any closer than that! >_
PoliticsMan101 2005-03-09 ch 1,	This was really good. It makes me feel I can do better in the world. People are getting lazier everyday. Well I reviewed, time for you to return the favor :-)
Darren 2005-03-09 ch 1,	wow thats pretty good. makes me want to go out and try and make a bigger difference to the world.
holocaustpulp 2005-03-07 ch 1,	This poem is decent in writting style, not to mention in some places particularly convincing ("...They could have given the whole world; Water, three times over..." etc.). It also has a message that must ring clear among all people, expecially the rich. it's good to know many on this website are now picking up this idea.
stuck here waiting 2005-03-07 ch 1,	Good Job...Your use of long lines works great for this pome and the message definetly comes through...Keep it up...and please...if you find the time...R&R my shtuff too...