-gapes-...awesome! Now I'm curious to know what twisted, sick, wonderful book you were reading. Good job.-hunts for a man-eating fountain on e-bay-

This is plain sick... which is good for a horror story. I enjoyed it, but rather not read something like that again. Very disturbing

That's just freaking creepy!

The format was distracting and I didn't find it funny. I think it would work better in a longer, more serious piece. Your style is good. Nice work, keep writing.

**Slave**

icky. bad fountain!

i like this story when are you going to update it?

haha i like it

it's one of those stories that makes you go "what the..."

but definitely originial, good job