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| smellslikerainbows 2005-08-08 ch 1,  | abuseI love how everything you write has such a pounding flow, so natural and unstoppable. It's especially beautiful here. The narrative, the story you're trying to tell twists almost away from your central point repeatedly, but the common thread is still there and that's good - because the looping tangents ultimately make everything wonderfully cohesive. You obviously feel very passionate about the topic - i would almost call the tone here urgent - and I love the bitter, yet hopeful, sarcasm here and there because it has a purpose. Love, and understanding, can conquer all. |
| Kyp, Prince of the Twice De... 2005-03-07 ch 1, | abuseHonestly, what was that? Please let me know, I'd like to hear your reasoning. First off, this is sexist beyond comprehension. Second, you've completely failed to prove any point, your just stringing together stereotypes and hoping for a result. Third, you don't understand your topic. Guys aren't against gays because we hate women or something, I and other guys believe that it's wrong. You need to get over your "Freedom Fighter" war and realize that your not fighting anybody. The war ended, women are equal. Now if you want men to slink away, your going to be a very dissapointed person. |
| LadyVerse 2005-03-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseoh my god. that was AWESOME! believe me hon, i know what i'm talking about when i say this: your work would KILL at a slam. i hope you are a slam poet, cuz this stuff is amazing. if you re type it so it's not one long paragraph, it would be perfect! yay! |