 Smartass Joker 2008-09-06 . chapter 2Awesome! But you haven't update in like a million years! Write more!! I LOVE it so far but now you just UPDATE!
Peace out,
Joker |
 Emerald123 2007-12-03 . chapter 2HAHA! 3 days...thats funny. more like 3 years...gosh...i know this stories on hold, but when is it NOT going to be? when you get tred of the other two? ... im waiting for an update... this story's really good. i just wish you'd care enough to continue it. |
 phelps112 2007-01-27 . chapter 2three days huh? liar, liar |
 mir99sna 2006-10-20 . chapter 2WOW, that was god! please write more! |
 weeee 2005-10-22 . chapter 2 u there? PLLZ UPDATE! |
 someone 2005-10-11 . chapter 2 I absolutely love the idea for the story, especially the protagonist's exotic backround. Most romantic stories nowadays are centered on gorgeous English people, and this seems to be a nice change. I would definately like to read the Duke's reaction to an exotic beauty. I do hope you decide to continue this story. It has great potential. |
 Wayward Ballerina 2005-05-16 . chapter 2Great story but it's beena bit more then 3 days... |
 chibichan366 2005-04-17 . chapter 2wow! the first chapter is very good! i can't wait for what happens next!please update soon! |
 Ravissante 2005-04-17 . chapter 2Love your writing! get on with the stories...well, read all your stories and they are fantasmic! |
 justcallmebubba 2005-04-13 . chapter 2good story, well written. keep it up!=D |
 theformatofit 2005-04-10 . chapter 2very good i look forward to the rest. |
 whimsicality 2005-03-25 . chapter 2good start! i'm intrsted to see where this goes; Gitana seems like a strong character. update soon! |
 Proserpina 2005-03-15 . chapter 2Seems a good start, keep going with it. I reserve judgement until I've read a bit more of it; still, you seem to have a good smooth style. I'll be interested to read more. |
 SilverMoonlitPath 2005-03-08 . chapter 2hey beautiful chap... looks like it might lead to something really good... hopes that you up-date it more often than your other storys... |
 yo sup 2005-03-07 . chapter 1 like the beginning, but 1 thing: when you say providence, do you mean province? |