Reviews for you were too late

Xioshe 2005-03-07 ch 1,	tis beautiful work!lenghty than what i mostly read, but i like it alot. the emotions and emphasis of phrases and words using bold type, italics, and underlines helped flow and get the feeling of what's going on!
WarriorHeart 2005-03-07 ch 1,	really interesting. not only did the whole each line express your feelings, but all of the specialized word(s) in bold, italics, and underlined said so much more. great work.