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Me! 2008-03-01 ch 5,	Oh please update this. If you already have the basic idea, please try to write it.
Teresa 2008-01-29 ch 5,	I don't suppose that you're ever going to update this, but it's such a fantastic story. Like, the best i've read on this entire site. Please update. I'm not the only one who wants you to continue this.
Writing4Eternity 2006-11-01 ch 5,	This story rocks!
Faedora 2006-08-22 ch 5,	Gasp! Almost a whole damn year without an update! What's going on? I'm sitting here about to blow my top. Okay, not really, but honestly, this story is fantastic. I like it as much as I like Close Encounters Inc., which is a LOT. Even though the plots are entirely different, the writing is still brilliant, and the way Andrea and Dean are portrayed is still fantastic. I'm glad that they're getting somewhere, especially now that Andrea is willing to cooperate (though it is quite suspicious for Dean). I have a feeling that they're going to have a moderate amount of fun from here on, but needless to say, it's not going to be a smooth ride (no pun intended). I like how you've revealed a little bit of Dean's past or rather, his deepest secrets with us, and am I wrong in thinking that we're going to dive deeper into him, and also Andrea? :) Ah, heart to heart moments are always sweet x) Oh, yes, and how many chapters are you expecting? I take it that once Dean delivers his necklace to his boss, he'll want out, but then again, will the boss let him leave so easily? Some more trouble, and hopefully, a little fluff and love along the way :) But of course, too much fluff is purely nauseating, while none is rather depressing. Anyway, I'm rambled on long enough, and I have stupid camp coming up, so I must depart now. I sincerely hope you pick up your fabulous imagination and type out another chapter to this brilliant story. Ciao for now!
peace etc 2006-06-25 ch 5,	this story is so amazing! You have to continue it! I love it! It's the best I've read of it's genre!
kAIT REDFERN 2005-12-20 ch 5,	I found it rather amusing when he got all worked up over the sarcastic comment she made to her mother(well at least the cooment her mum took for sarcasm,) I bet his heart virtually stopped in the car.I understand her need for adventure, but I just hope she doesn't start becoming meek and obeying his every whim, although I doubt it. This chapter made it clear she will cooperate, but only if she is running the show on her own terms. It was nice to see Dean open up and talk about his family, hopefully we'll learn more about him and his past.They are both quite lonely , troubled characters( although D needs to work alone, he does seem to have slight things in common with her, even though they are from opposite ends of the tracks and on the surface are about as diffrent as two people can be.) Both are sarcastic, daring, independant, and loners to some extent. Like you made clear, she is not really close to her and family and tends to not have any real friends, so it makes sense they would be a connection between them.Luv Kaitx
Forest-Maiden 2005-11-01 ch 5,	This is a very interesting story. You're characters colenside with each other very well. I hope to see more chapters from you soon. ^^ That's all for now, keep up the goor work. Forest-Maiden
Luv and Peace 2005-10-27 ch 5,	Hey. Awesome story so far. Update soon!
theformatofit 2005-10-25 ch 5,	so why is the necklace so important? is it a relic or is it just really expensive or does it hold personal value to the persom paying him eh? very good though update soon.
star123 2005-10-10 ch 5,	There were a couple of things cleared up here although the idea that she hadn't even thought of her mobile was kind of odd. And they'd better start being a bit more normal when they go out in public (like in the diner) because otherwise people are going to get suspicious very quickly! Maybe you're trying to build up a moment when they do get caught. Anyway, I enjoyed this chapter especially the "We're talking again?" lines. Thanks for updating.
Choice 2005-10-10 ch 5,	I read this whole story so far today, and I love it. Please update it as soon as possible.
Crystal109 2005-10-10 ch 5,	Whe you updated! I hope they get some action going soon, you know what I mean? =P Haha just kidding, but really, I liked the character development here as well. We finally get to know more about these characters. Dean! Aw, he has a sister. Is that important? Like, mucho mucho importante? (Sorry, I seem to always go into some sort of Spanish mode, even though I'm only in Spanish 3...) But yeah. Great update, do it again sometime? =D
DuchessYappingDog 2005-10-10 ch 5,	M. I'm still wondering if they'll get caught. At least he's warming up to her... somewhat. Hahahaha. That's good enough for me now!
Nikkole15 2005-10-10 ch 5,	they say all you need to do is... :)Anyways I would like to take the time to say 'Congradulations you have just one a million dollars'...But I think you caught onto the saracasm. hehehehehe, anyways I love the story, reminds me of a heated romance. The kind that could end being sloppy and they end up getting killed or something. Yeah just thought I let you know and remember to :). UPDATE SOON! ~Nikkole~
limbo-gal 2005-10-10 ch 5,	Nice chapter, but I think I need to see a little more of where Andrea is coming from and why she wants to help "Mike" all of sudden. You outlined the details vaguely but it would help to see a bit more emotion on Andrea's part so that we can understand and sympathise with the girl. But hey, I love your work, so keep letting the words flow!-EMMA

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