Wow...simply wow. You wrote this beautifully, with childlike innocence, in such a way, you couldnt help but be sad.

contentnot jadednor jealous,SG

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that was amazing... Simply AMAZING.

Angsty is good.

Wow.. that was really sad, but really good. I liked it.

BTW, when people review my stories, I read all of their work... this is gonna take a while... O.O

Sadness fills my mind to read this story

It's so sad..omg i felt like crying myself...

I love this story. So does Kassey.

Hi!

Um, this is amazing because you showed examples of child-like innocence. I truley loved this and it will go up in my favorites list.

Kassey: I loved this story and it reminded me of the time when I was really young and my mother was divorcing my father. I can connect with the character and now I'm crying. You are a most talented writer and I am glad I got to read this story. Keep writing, because I enjoy your work.

-Kassey and Kita

Dude. This is something I absolutely love. The power and emotions in the words, the childish innocence. I LOVE IT. Very, very well written. Favoriting this one, for sure.

Luv it Cerri. And once again, you have surpassed me in writing. I could learn a lot from you! "

erm, are you feeling all right? it's really really (x39) super angsty. *puts hand on forhead to check for fever* it's good though...anyway. i reviewed. so there. happy?

It is angsty, but it is tastefully done. I'm impressed! The internal vs. the external with the child narrator. Great stuff! I love the line about the peaches. I don't know, it just hit me.

Believe me, angsty is very okay i thought it was really good, and that your choice of repetition is great. i say well done, Cerii-Chan _

Max W.