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Reviews For: Assassin

SweetWithUncertainty 2006-04-23 ch 2,	I loved this, and i dont anything is wrong with it. i cant wait till the next chapter.~As you have probably noticed I have reviewed all your stories/poems (except #8) The reason? Just because I felt like it, and it was worth it.~
Myke Padfoot 2006-03-16 ch 2,	good chapter, but that last bit i was literally 'in the dark' cuz it wasn't as discriptive as you usually are. Side note:in the first chapter, the projection keyboard--been done. just not released.^^" You also could've made that last bit sound more sinister. Besides that, it was a good chapter. UPDATE PLEASE! --myke
Myke Padfoot 2005-09-05 ch 1,	GACK! FINISH IT!1 I'M DYING!
Rubyme 2005-09-03 ch 1,	n.n I heart that face too! ^_^ Anyway, that was really good. Not violent though... The rating should stay where it is only because you talk about guns and violence so much. I TOTALLY SPEAK JAPANESE!... sorry... I'd like to say that this was a very good idea and hope it is continued someday. Its very bad to leave unfinished stories. Anyway, can't think of anything to criticize you on, SORRY! Not that this is perfect, but I just can't think of anything XD My bad.
Bean Langdon 2005-08-28 ch 1,	sigh you need to continue this story. go deeper into Glaive.What is it? Where is it? Who is it? And develop your characters more.Don't leave me hanging.
Crazy In 88 2005-03-28 ch 1,	Not that violent- but definitely good. Violence is stabbing someone in the heart with a sword twice their size. lol. Good work though. Post more soon please!_yin
Moony 2005-03-19 ch 1,	I like this one best, if you ever finish it...It's exciting and has potential. SO FINISH IT! okay?
Angel Savii5 2005-03-19 ch 1,	This story does not suck! It kinda frightened me yeah, but it was elegantly written. You couldn't have done better. I can't write anything as angsty as this or scary, but well, I ...yeah. This was remarkable and I hope you can create a follow up. Great jobby! Heylo again!! This is Kassey! Unlike Kita up there, I think this story wasn't all that frightening. It was claimed at scary with the murder and guns and rose thing, but well, you see, it didn't scare me. You could have done better. What the hac!@@!@! Don't mind Kassey!! ^.^ She's just jealous that you can make up stories and she can't. ^o^ -Kaiaiaiaiastststseaeaeaey & Kita & Kassey. Sorry about this ^ we were fighting about whose name goes first. ^_^
midnight assasin 2005-03-10 ch 1,	I am finally seeing powerful women who kick ** awesome. check out my story asap. Shadows of fear
iamwater 2005-03-09 ch 1,	really good! I loved how you made them all women! Please continue.
Leoanda Taylor 2005-03-09 ch 1,	Wow! Hey col! Please write more! When you sent me my review, I decided to check out your fics and this one is well good! Fantastic! You go girl! Heheheheh!

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