aw! that was great.

It's probably one of the really bad things to have happen to you when you're growing up. I'm really sorry that your sister had to have that happen.

I enjoy how the pain and anger in the poem is highly visible. It makes me able to really feel what you mean when I read it.

Oh, this almost made me cry it is so moving :(...

It's really well-written, and it has such a sad, moving message...very deep...

GREAT JOB!

My deepest condolences to your sister...it's hard to lose a treasured companion.

~Always, saeo