Reviews for Seeds in the Sea - FictionPress.com

Athena's girl 2005-06-15 ch 1,	Like I said before, it's got beautiful imagery, but i have to agree with the person either above or below me - "sometimes the bud opens, sometimes the canoe doesn't sink." Why do you suddenly seem, Sheep-Dog, to always vear towards the darker side of poetry?
one heart in 2 2005-04-03 ch 1,	... I think I'll find a corner to go cry in now... grins I like the imagery. I'd like a few more adjectives, but I tend to kill things with too many adjectives. I'm not quite sure why, but I really like this peice. remember though... sometimes the bud opens, sometimes the canoe doesn't sink.