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| dacman 2005-06-08 ch 1,   | Great poem from start to finish. Ending ties back to title and beginning of poem, which is what I liked. |
| Confused-Mind 2005-05-04 ch 1, | I loved how you wrote it and the emotion involved. You seem to be a really great person and you will definately see your paradise some day. Keep up the good work because i love reading your stuff. |
| aliasfan 2005-03-21 ch 1, | Another great poem! Don't worry, you'll find this paradise someday! ^_~ |
| Wingless Flight 2005-03-08 ch 1, | not bad, not bad. There is never anything bad about wanting to find paradise. |
| wordsworth in a garbage can 2005-03-07 ch 1, | it would be a nice feeling, wouldn't it? good job. |