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| Chemy 2008-07-16 ch 13, anon. | abuseI'm so loving this baby thing! |
| leemya 2008-07-16 ch 13,  | abuseGreat Story! I hope you continue writing soon. |
| sunflowersing 2008-07-15 ch 13, | abuseThat is so hilarious that they got stuck together on the baby project! I hope she says yes to Quarter. It would be funny if they went home after practice, they start making out and then the baby cries, interupting them. Actually, just frusterating. I can hardly wait for the next chapter! Yay! By the way, in the last paragraph of this chapter, it says "...before walking off to his neck class,...", it should say "next". Keep up the awesome story! sunflowersing |
| JadeDream 2008-07-15 ch 13, | abusewhoo another chapter! update soon! |
| AlexisLovesYou 2008-07-15 ch 13, | abuseI hated having to do that project, I ended up taking the voice box out of my baby so I wouldn't here it crying. Let's just say that I'm not exactly mother material. |
| Isabella Fluduano 2008-07-15 ch 13, | abuseOh my god you have to update this story as soon as possible! It is a great story. There are a few errors, such as you keep spelling confident like this confidant. It is only one letter though so it isn't that big of a deal. I have had a relationship like these two (Quarter and Maddy) so I completely understand there feelings and why things are so complicated. It is very realistic. PLEASE UPDATE THOUGH! Sincerely, Isabella Fluduano |
| slightlyaddictedx3 2008-07-15 ch 13, | abuseNICE TWIST ! |
| WriterGurl123 2008-07-15 ch 13, | abuseLove it! I practically peed my pants reading this story, especially the part where Maddy comes in waddeling like a duck with her pregnant belly. I can't wait to see what her coach says about her belly. |
| dramaqueen89 2008-07-15 ch 12, anon. | abuseSAY YES FOR CRYING OUT LOUD!! haha. update soon. |
| JadeDream 2008-07-14 ch 12, | abuseOh! i hope she says yes! Update soon i cant wait to read the next chapter! |
| I Murder on Impulse 2008-07-14 ch 12, | abuseUpdate more? xx |
| hopelessromantic444 2008-07-14 ch 12, | abuseawesome chapter! thanks for the update =) |
| WriterGurl123 2008-07-14 ch 12, | abuseI definitely like the changes and I think that it's turning out really well. The whole marriage thing was a bit awkward though, but it was funny to read. Love it! |
| cheergurl12 2008-07-13 ch 11, anon. | abuseWen are u gonna 2 update?!?!?! |
| rae 2008-07-11 ch 1, anon. | abusegreat chapter! |