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| marikamaroca 2008-05-04 ch 6,   | keep up the good work |
| SilverSylph 2007-12-04 ch 6, | where does CHBA take place? |
| Jade Elf 2007-10-03 ch 6, | Awesome story, roz is really cute. I cant wait to see what happens |
| Rose of Eden 2007-08-09 ch 6, | no! it can't be over it just can't be! |
| The Mango Tango 2007-08-08 ch 6, | charles and Ian sound really cute haha. :] well GREAT story. update update :] |
| Cooties 2007-08-02 ch 6, | So cute! I like Ian the best of the twins, but Donovon is such a sweetheart, he doesn't deserve this! More Donovon/Roz action, please? He needs it. |
| Pieces of the sun 2007-07-22 ch 6, | I like! Continue please! |
| Monika 2007-07-11 ch 6, | Absolutely awesome story that was made by an awesome writer =) Keep up the GREAT work! btw...psht i'd choose charles over ian any day (i just felt like telling you this :) :P. I dunno i just like the boys in black that listen to heavy metal,are ticklish, a heavy sleeper, a smart ** and a bad ** at the same time AND o a crazy driver :PHAHA (sorri i don't care about donovan too much :P aha) |
| midnightbeauty 2007-07-11 ch 6, | Oh thank god, love the chapter and I'm not dead! Aw, but I wanted 'em to use those shockie thingies on me...wel maybe next time :P I totally LOVE Ian and Charles. They're so cute! Charles is hilarious, though I fear we're a bit too alike...I get so many injuries (I somehow only manage to get injuries that send me to the hospital) so I don't really get fazed by them anymore x.x I'm pretty sure that's a bad thing :) Eh, too bad. I love that Charles actually has a weakness. It makes him seem more...human. :P Now Ian just needs more personality ;) (sorry Ian) Roz should totally break up with her boyfriend for one of the twins (Yes I do realize that's a bit heartless towards the boyfriend, but, well, I like the twins better. :D) Kay, can't wait for the next chapter! I'll be fantasizing about it till' it's posted! :P Kisses, midnightbeauty |
| FreakierThanThou 2007-07-10 ch 6, | This chapter is just as loved as the previous ones. I like Charles and Ian a lot, their whole whatdo with the presents was hilarious. I really like Charles' quirks, you did a great job on those, and I hope you continue with some more of them. And give Roz a bit of quirkiness, please? Keep writing, -Freaky |
| katieee 2007-07-10 ch 6, | I guess I would believe you; and this chapter just made me love this story more. : ) |
| ski bird 2007-07-10 ch 6, | really really nice! it would be great if u wrote a little summary telling us about last chapter to refresh the memory ;) update soon!! will definitely be waiting. |
| Sweet Child 2007-07-10 ch 6, | Mwuaahahaa... I managed to make you change it to humor... mwuahahhaa *Cough, hackle*. Okay - excuse me, I'm feeling kind of hyper at the moment. I'm happy that you updated, your story always gives me a good laugh. "He's going to kill me! Oh my god, he's going to kill me!!" I loved that part. Absolutely hilarious, among other scenes. Your brilliance amazes me, oh wise one *bows* And, yeah, I do love summer. Although, I procrastinate way too much. *Shrugs* What can I say. Just one last thing before I go. *Steals Chevrolet keys from Charles* Thanks for the car! *Runs and hides for cover* |
| pop-yur-fcukn-collar. 2007-07-10 ch 6, | Ahahahahaha, I love Charles. Aw, he's ticklish and has a fetish for chicken. Update sooN! |
| Lady of Confusion 2007-07-09 ch 6, | its really funny! update soon! |