aw! Shes blushing! I want her eyes! I think they would make a cute couple. But you need to discribe them more. All i know about her is she has black hair and green/blue eyes. And i dont think i know anything about him...

I really liked it! wow good plot line. But i think the dude likes that chick...

I like this story a lot so far. Surprise with him becoming solid. If you need a Beta reader my E-mail is Aivlys_evol556@yahoo.com I'm very good at spelling and grammer I'd be more then happy to proofread your chapters for you!~CC~

This is really good. I'm enjoying it so far on the first chapter. That's unusual, I usually have to slog through the first chapter and then get to the good parts. Hopefully you can follow up on your strong start. I'll keep reading.

Somewhat creepy, a hint of autobiographical-ness (that a word?), and some comedy here and there. I'm intrigued.

OMFG...OMFG...thats like better than any story ive ever read...wow...make more like real soon!

i'd almost forgotten abotu this one, but i'm glad you updated. I like it. I hope you update soon. I think this is going to be a great story.

Interesting. I can't wait to see the next chapter. I think it has potential.

I like! I like! Update soon please!

Looks good so far. This is a good idea. Update as soon as you can.

I like your descriptions and I really love your premise. I can't wait to see how the story unfolds.

I like your story a lot but I can't relate to it...But I know a friend who can.