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Reviews For: Happy Birthday

Moon-Chaser
2007-08-15
ch 1,
Wow, this is very well written and I like the way you structured it as well. I hope that you are still in touch with this person, she sounds very special.

Keep it up.
darkmistresslae
2005-04-24
ch 1,
this is really pretty, and touching. i feel this way with so many friends, way to capture the feeling!
peaceman4ever
2005-03-16
ch 1,
VEERY SO SWQEET. this poem RULES!
Crazy Biene
2005-03-13
ch 1,
aw...lovely.
Broken Melody
2005-03-10
ch 1,
Wow... pretty I wish someone would write that for me!
xHannahx
2005-03-09
ch 1,
some of the lines seem a letle forced, but other than that this is sweet. i would do the same for one of my friends, but shed have a go for being pretentious. ah well. nicely done.

Han.
Rosanna28
2005-03-09
ch 1,
That was so cool! I'm sure your friend will love it.

I did too!

Much love,

Rosanna.
putz-6
2005-03-08
ch 1,
this is a really good poem ^_^
Kira06
2005-03-08
ch 1,
That was sweet.
dancingintherain
2005-03-08
ch 1,
wow, this is very sweet! im sure your friend will be VERY happy to read this!

muchLUBkerr
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