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| slave to the voices 2005-03-10 ch 2,  | abuseAnother good chapter. You've got some great suspense building here, I can't wait to see what happens. Nice work, keep writing. **Slave** |
| slave to the voices 2005-03-08 ch 1, | abuseGood opening. The idea is fresh and I think you can turn this into a great story. Nice work, keep writing. **Slave** |