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| Amelia Carr 2005-03-08 ch 1,   | very good; it leaves an imprint on a reader's mind. the only thing i would suggest is some punctuation to make it clearer. |
| Black Elysium 2005-03-08 ch 1, | so, cute! but yeah, very different from your usual... but so cute! :D |