| Reviews for Bonds of Kin |
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lilydaphine 4/19/05 . chapter 3 Aw. . .it was just getting good! |
Rosanna28 3/21/05 . chapter 3 Hey there Hawke! Thank you so much for your reviews again, you don't know how much they mean _ About my poem 'My little loved ones', yeah, I feel that way sometimes. I have these periodes in which all I can think of is cutting...They last like, 3 or 4 weeks and then they leave for 3 or 4 weeks. So yeah. Thanks for offering that I can talk to you! Means so much to me! Really..._ Anyway, back to the real purpose of this review _ I really love what you're doing to this story, it's so awesome! It's so different from all the other stories that I read, so that's really cooL! Thanks again Hawke! You're so awesome! _ Much love, Rosanna. |
Brooke ORiley 3/20/05 . chapter 3well, that doesn't exactly bode well, now does it? "“How long have you been in here,” Josphitha asked the cat " you want a question mark there...i'm sure you know that, everyone makes proofing mistakes. but it might be a good idea to look it over carefully before posting. how long exactly will this be? because so far, these three parts could all easily fit into one chapter, both length-wise and content-wise. anyhow, it's interesting so far...not quite sure what you're aiming for just yet, but that's pretty much the way it goes, isn't it? |
Rosanna28 3/9/05 . chapter 2Hey, so I FINALLY read it now! _ I think you're doing a great job, you've shown that you're not only an amazing poet but also a great story writer! Hope you update soon! I wanna know who this mysterious figure is _ Much love, Rosanna. |
Rosanna28 3/8/05 . chapter 1 Is it ok if I read this tomorrow? I know you've reviewed my new stuff right away but I'm just so tired! It's almost 2.30 in the middle of the night here! _ Hope you don't mind. Much love, Rosanna. |
Lost Chi 3/8/05 . chapter 1Great first chapter! I am really going to make sure I keep an eye out for it in the future! You really have quite a writing talent. By the way, can anyone please read a story I have on the site. It's called The Pocketwatch. Please read and review. Thank you very much! |