Interesting thoughts, I like the images it evokes like "napkins crowded with words." Nice ending too.

Thankyou for the review by the way.

::wide eyes::

This poem has touched me, touched me very deeply. This reflects a lot about what is going on in the world and how some teenagers feel. Your poem has given us a foundation to rest on as we express our feelings.

Thank you for that. It is extremely helpful for our day and age, even if this poem is unfinished!

Thanks,~ Deh Cactus