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Reviews For: Travelling at Night

Truth that lies
2006-10-25
ch 1,
Nicely done, i like the twist at the end! It's simple yet intricate, bravo
Kim Armijo
2006-09-13
ch 1,
Very well written. I love the description you encrypt into your writing. Very well done! ;)
Forgotten-Ground
2005-04-17
ch 1,
Hey Fran, I don't remember you saying that you'd put another story up! I love that last line of this piece so much!

'What better first thought to have of a foreign planet, other than sheer beauty?'

It's just beautiful. I really like your discription too, it's really vivid and imaginative, it's really simple and short but it's perfect.

p.s God i sounded like a sentimental old fart in that one didn't I?
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