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| Truth that lies 2006-10-25 ch 1, | Nicely done, i like the twist at the end! It's simple yet intricate, bravo |
| Kim Armijo 2006-09-13 ch 1, | Very well written. I love the description you encrypt into your writing. Very well done! ;) |
| Forgotten-Ground 2005-04-17 ch 1, | Hey Fran, I don't remember you saying that you'd put another story up! I love that last line of this piece so much! 'What better first thought to have of a foreign planet, other than sheer beauty?' It's just beautiful. I really like your discription too, it's really vivid and imaginative, it's really simple and short but it's perfect. p.s God i sounded like a sentimental old fart in that one didn't I? |