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Reviews For: Testament to Time

linaeve
2005-04-21
ch 1,
beautiful imagery & rhyme. the wistful and melancholy mood surrounding the poem was at once subtle and evocative; nicely done =)
Diana Shore
2005-03-09
ch 1,
This was very good. Even though the sentiment was of mourning the passing season; it still felt like a welcome greeting to the new season.

I think the second line would flow a little better if you put: The standing testament to time passing by.

Take care, D.
Crimsonoaks
2005-03-08
ch 1,
very nice with a melancholy feel to it. um what are ides tho? i think it may be a typo, but the rest of it is good.
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