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| linaeve 2005-04-21 ch 1, | beautiful imagery & rhyme. the wistful and melancholy mood surrounding the poem was at once subtle and evocative; nicely done =) |
| Diana Shore 2005-03-09 ch 1, | This was very good. Even though the sentiment was of mourning the passing season; it still felt like a welcome greeting to the new season. I think the second line would flow a little better if you put: The standing testament to time passing by. Take care, D. |
| Crimsonoaks 2005-03-08 ch 1, | very nice with a melancholy feel to it. um what are ides tho? i think it may be a typo, but the rest of it is good. |