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| LSMunch 2005-03-13 ch 1, | abuseLove that last line. Wonderful metaphor. |
| Restless Brook 2005-03-09 ch 1, | abuseThis was wonderful. Its flow is very abrupt and chaotic-much like the war you're describing. This was an excellent poem. Keep writing! |